Heaven
Imagine a place where the odors of perfume
spread throughout all over the land. Where colors of the rivers are crystal
clear flowing everywhere you look by. A
place where majestic palaces are built in diamonds gold and emeralds. Not only palaces
covered in rich element appear but architectures and every building and
everything that exist cannot be afforded by the money of all the living things
living on earth, because it is priceless.
As my
feet has transcend from earth going to a magical place called heaven which no
human has ever experienced back alive. My eyes and body were capture by the
beauty of the nature and the unrealistic figure that was right there before me.
Continue walking until I was forced to stop by the beauty of green pacific
grass which I lay myself down on the mellow grass with tall and rigid trees all around me, I look
up the sky seeing two moments of time on that very same sky. The brightness of
the sun which reflected my left eye make me wanted to shut it and sleep like I just
finish from taking a cool bath. On the other side of my eye were dark and
beautiful stars with the reflections of the moon. First time in my life seeing an
outcast combination this fitted in perfectly. Look back on the ground beside me
was empty for a moment I think of someone who would be there beside me making
this wonderful place even more grandiose.
As I have
get up and continue my journey my eyes suddenly saw something again this time. A flamboyantly colored rainbow of the hottest
shades of blues and reds and yellows form an arch across the sky with glittering
everywhere. Looking through the transparency of the rainbow there was a
mountain forming the shape of a heart and a guy was at the center. I remembered
it was very familiar looks that I have seen but I can’t make out in a distance.
Then two more came beside him and thousands of aggrandize flying creature which were like
angels form through the sky. Before I could walk and see or even touch what was
there in front of me, I was shook awake.
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This is the trees which I have found before I lay down besides it. I Got it here |
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The imginary scene which is describe in my essay which one day would not just be only a dream I got it here |
Wow! Your writing is well-done! I could nearly imagine the Heaven you saw. Your descriptions were so clear. I tried to find any grammar mistakes but I couldn't find it . (: I hope you keep it up. Nice writing and I enjoyed reading your 'heaven'.
ReplyDeleteps. Why don't you change the color of your 5 words into red ?(: